Thursday, November 20, 2014

My Personal Journal [8th Grade]


Dear Students:

I hope this message finds you well and motivates you to get that yearned extra point. Here is where you'll post your texts and read your peers' comments as well. Feel free to comment and ask if you have questions.

 Best,

Juan Guevara

DEADLINE: NOVEMBER 24th, MONDAY

28 comments:

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  2. Hello. My name is Gerald Lobos, I have 13 years. I live in valparaiso and study in a school named Patricio Lynch located Playa Ancha this year i am study 8th basic. And now i come to answer three question.

    1) What can you do to improve your physical condition? something good for improving physical condition I think you have to do a lot of sports and eat healthy if you don't do these things you are goin to raise a lot if weight.

    2) What can you do against bullying? For this I would make campaigns and speeches of bullying and explain that it's bad.

    3) What can you do to become a better student? to be a better student you have to work study hard.

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  3. Hi! My name is Sofía Diaz and I’m 13 years old, I study in Patricio lynch school from Valparaiso I’m going to answer some questions they are 3

    1)What can you do to improve your physical condition?
    I might run in the morning or in the afternoon, also eating healthy like a: fruits, greens and meat

    2)What can you do against bullying?
    I might more tolerable and help victims of bullying

    3)What can you do to become a better student?
    I might study hard and doing the homework for the extra point
    XD

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  5. Hello. My name is Bastian Pereira, I have 13 years old. I live in valparaiso and study in Patricio Lynch School. I like watch tv and play soccer. And now i come to answer three question.

    1) What can you do to improve your physical condition?
    In order that one improves his physical condition one has to do very much exercise, eating healthy things, avoiding the food chatarra.si one continues all that to live healthily.
    2) What can you do against bullying?
    I believe that to stop the bullying one tendria that to put campaigns to stop this, to make clear to the pupils that this is bad that it can provoke many things as sadness between other feelings

    3) What can you do to become a better student?
    In order that one could be a better student it must study very much, ask the teacher if one has doubts, doing works, tasks and come always to the college to learning.

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  6. Hi! my name is Joaquin, I live in Valparaiso and I like the Footbol and video-games. I study in Patricio Lynch School. And right now Im going to answer the following questions: :D

    1)What can you do the improve your physical condition?

    - I think dat the best way to improve my physical condition is practice sport, eating healthy foods (fruits and vegetables).

    2)What can you do against bullying?

    - I believe dat the best way to against bullying is educating about bullying.

    3)What can you do to become a better student?

    - the best way to be a good student is studying with dedication.

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  7. Hi, My name is Valentina Casanueva, I’m 14 years old. I live in valparaiso and I study in Patricio Lynch school. I like listen to music , especially if is a group like “Guns n’ roses” or “Aerosmith”. Now I come to answer three question:

    1) What can you do to improve your physical condition? I have to eat healthy and practice sport with the end of be healthy and have a good physical condition.

    2) What can you do against bullying? I can make posters, and motivate people against bullying..

    3) What can you do to become a better student? I can study much , make a timetable for reinforce the subjects and put attention in the class.

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  8. Hi, my name is Fabrizzio Sotelo. I'm 13 years old. I'm attend to Patricio Lynch school. Right now I'm going to answer the following questions

    1) What can you do to improve your physical condition?
    - That improve my physical condition, i could do more sport

    2) What can you do against bullying?
    - I think that the bullying is going to end when expel a bad boys

    3) What can you do to become a better student?
    - I could do to become a better student if i study most in my house

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  9. Sebastián Soto
    I'm Sebastian, and I study in the school Patricio Lynch in the Valparaíso. I like playny soccer, I also like watchiny tv. Now the questions with his response
    1)What can you do to improve your physical condition?
    -What can do to improve my physical condition is to do more swimming.
    2)What can you do against bullying?
    -What can do to against bullying is to help the victims of bullying and makebell.
    3)What can you do to become a better student?
    -I to be better students it is necessary to pay attention in classes.

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  10. Hi,my name is Mauricio Aguilar, I’m 14 years old. I live in valparaiso and I study in Patricio Lynch school.I like play soccer and listen to music.Now I'm going to answer the following questions.
    1) What can you do to improve your physical condition?
    -I think that do a lot of sport and eat healty food is the best way to improve my physical condition.

    2) What can you do against bullying?
    -I think that educate to the people is the only way to finish with the bullying.

    3)3) What can you do to become a better student?
    -To become a better student I have to study a lot and pay attention in class.

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  11. Hi, i'm Javiera, i'm 14 years old and i live in Valparaiso. I like listening to music and i like reading.
    1) What can you do to improve your physical condition?
    -To improve my physical condition, i can do more exercise, eat more healthy and drinking water.

    2) What can you do against bullying?
    -I belive that bulliyng is make talks so that the people understand better the concept of "bulliyng".

    3) What can you do to become a better student?
    -What you can do to be a better student is study more often comment or ask for help if you don't understand something and pay more attention in class.

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  12. Hi!, my name is Benjamin but my nickname is "Benjo" , I study in the school Patricio Lynch and I live in Valparaiso . I don´t like reading and I am studing a lot for PML´s .
    Now i will answer the book´s questions:

    1) What can you do to improve your physical condition?
    -That improve my physical condition , I can go to the gym , eat heatly food and don´t eat candies.

    2) What can you do against bullying?
    - I think that the bullying finish with more campaing.

    3) What can you do to become a better student?
    - I can be a better student with a more study in my house and in the school.

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  14. ¡ Hey teacher! I´m Ignacio, I´m 13 years old, I´m loking forword to be freshman, because I want to learn new things, I study in the school Patricio Lynch of Valparaiso and I have a dream...
    1) What can you do to improve your physical condition?
    - I think that for improve physical condition is very important eat healthy food and do a lot of sport.
    2) What can you do against bullying?
    - To against the bullying I think that educate people is the best option, to make they know than be a bully is an error.
    3) What can you do to become a better student?
    - To become a better student,we have to study a lot and pay attention to the teacher when explains something.


    Ignacio Rodríguez V.

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  15. ¡ Hello! My name is Diego González, and I´m 13 years old, I study in the school Patricio Lynch. I play soccer and practice swimming. I live in Valparaiso, Chile. My favorite hobby is dance and play soccer. I am goig to answer 3 questions.
    1) What can you do to improve your physical condition?
    - I would play soocer, basketball and boxing. I would eat healthy food and drink water every day.
    2) What can you do against bullying?
    - I think that people must says "no,bullying", because is very bad for the life. I would talk with my classmates about the bullying for help a other children.
    3) What can you do to become a better student?
    - I would study, read and do the homework every day. I would pay attention in the class and always listen to the teachers.

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  16. Hello!! My name is Felipe Tamblay, I'm 14 years old,I live in valparaiso I like the dogs and like practice sports. Now I'm going to answer the fallowing questions.
    1) What can you do to improve your physival condition?
    -Something goog for improving physical condition I have to practice more sports and eat healthy.
    2) What can you do against bullying?
    - I would create a program to educate otherwise students and destroy this big problem.
    3) What can ypu do become a better student?

    -To be a better student I have to do my homeworks and pay attention in class.

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  17. Hi! I´m Camila, I am 14 years old, I study in Patricio Lynch school, I like the basketball and I like singing (and I do that very well).
    Now I´m going to answer 3 questions of the student book.
    1.- What can you do to improve your physical condition?
    - I can do more exercise like crunches, squats and eat more healthy.
    2.- What can you do against bullying?
    - I can trying to change the way of thinking of the person who make bullying.
    3.- What can you do to become a better student?
    -I think that I can study more and pay more attention in class.

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  18. Hello! My name is Macarena Medina, I am 13 years old, I live in Valparaiso and I'm going to answer 3 questions for the English class.
    1) What can you do to improve your physical condition? I might run in the morning and I might go to the gym. Also, I might eat healthy.
    2) What can you do against bullying? For this, I might organize a meeting with my classmates for talk about the bad and good things of people. Also, I might defend to the persons that need help.
    3) What can you do to become a better student? For this, I might take notes, I might pay attention, I might do my homework, I might ask my questions and, the most important, I might be responsable.

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  19. Hi,my name is Kaitlin Diaz, I’m 14 years old. I live in valparaiso and I study in Patricio Lynch school.I like listen to music and talk with my friends.Now I'm going to answer the following questions.
    1) What can you do to improve your physical condition?
    -For improve my physical condition,I have to do a lot of sport and eat healty food.

    2) What can you do against bullying?
    -I think than change the way of think of the person who makes bullying is the best option.

    3) What can you do to become a better student?
    -To become a better student,I think than I have to pay attention in class and study a lot.

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  20. Hi, my name is Sofia Mesina, I'am 13 years old, I study in the school Patricio Lynch of Valparaiso.
    Now I'm going to answer 3 questions

    1) What can you do to improve your physical condition?
    - I can you sport every day.

    2) What can you do against bullying?
    - Do not discriminate, defend bullying.

    3) What can you do to become a better student?
    - Study more, make every homework, ask all that I don't understand.

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  21. Hello, my name is Vicente Bastias, I’m 14 years old. I live in Valparaiso and I study in Patricio Lynch School. I like to play league of legends and share with others, and now I will answer 3 questions.
    1) What can you do to improve your physical condition?
    To be honest I do not exercise but sometimes run.
    2) What can you do against bullying?
    My parents taught me two things my mother told me to be alert a teacher, my father beating them if necessary why I teach defend.
    3) What can you do to become a better student?
    Not consider myself the best student but I do my effort that could recommend would be the pay attention to what they are talking.

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  22. Hi!, my name is Nazareth, my nickname is nazita. I'm 13 years, I love octopuses, cats, and listen to music. My favorite color is black, and I'm the fan #1 of the chocolate *^* , I really love chocolate.
    Good, I'm going to answer the next 3 questions of the students book:

    #1: What can you do to improve your physical condition?
    I can participate more in the class of physical education
    #2: What can you do against bullying?
    I can bullyng at the people that do bullyng to other people
    #3: What can you do to become a better student?
    I can pay more attention in classes.

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  23. Hi! My name is Matias. I'm 14 years old and i live in Valparaiso, Chile. I like listen to music and speak with my friends... AH! And my birthday is in October 29th...

    *What can you do to improve increase your physical condition?
    -I can participe more in activities of sports and eat good

    *What can you do to Against Bullying?
    -Which do not practice it, so that nobody do.

    *What can you do to Become a better student?
    -Pay attention in class and take notes.

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  24. Hi! my name is Belen, I'm 14 years old, I live in Valparaiso, I like listen to music and I like reading. Now I´m going to answer 3 questions of the student book.

    What can you do to improve your physical condition?
    I can do more exercise and eat more healthy

    What can you do against bullying?
    I can make posters for stop the bullying

    What can you do to become a better student?
    I can study every day and pay attention in class

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  25. Hi! my name is María José and my friends called me Majo! , I'm 14 years old, I live in Valparaíso, and study in Patricio Lynch School, I love dancing and listen to music.
    I'm going to answer the following questions.

    1) What can you do to improve your physical condition?
    - I might run in the afternoon every week, and eat healty food like: fruits and vegetables, and oats.

    2) What can you do against Bullyng?
    - I motivate people against bullying, and organize a talk for change the way of think of the people.

    3) What can you do to become a better student?
    - I might a study every day, listen to the teachers and take more note in my notebook.

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  26. Hi, my name is Matias Cabrera. I´m14 years old. I study in Patricio Lynch school. I like magic and robotics.
    now I´m going to answer three questions of the student book.
    -What can you do to improve your physical condition?
    I believe that I can more exercise like arm´s flexing, crunsh, trekking and running.
    -What can you do against bullying?
    I can change my way of thinking, because the person must change, not the world.
    -What can you do to become a better student?
    I can study more, I can do my homework and I can pay attention in the class.

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  27. Hi! My name is Elena Domínguez. I'm 14 years old and i live in Valparaíso. I like listen to music, read and watch movies.
    Now i will answer 3 questions:

    1)What can you do to improve increase your physical condition?
    - Exercise daily and have a balanced diet.

    2)What can you do to Against Bullying?
    - Meetings could be organized to speak on the topic and create awareness.

    3) What can you do to Become a better student?
    - Pay attention in class,to do my homework and ask if you have questions on any topic.

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